This is devastating.The voice carries such helplessness despite its power- knowing, seeing, even offering mercy, and still being unable to alter what is already in motion. ‘Two lovers death-drunk’ is such a striking line and one of my favourites. Thankyou for sharing and I’m so glad I stumbled upon your page.
This is devastating.The voice carries such helplessness despite its power- knowing, seeing, even offering mercy, and still being unable to alter what is already in motion. ‘Two lovers death-drunk’ is such a striking line and one of my favourites. Thankyou for sharing and I’m so glad I stumbled upon your page.
i agree, that line is gorgeous <3
wow, thank you so much for this thoughtful comment <3
the poem is absolutely lovely <3 and i love the detail you've put into curating this post. :) excellent job.
i appreciate this so much! thank you!
what an incredible take on the myth, and what an incredible poem to express the amalgam of feelings!
omg thank you